gnat (2)
Here's an idea I had for a "concrete" version of John's "gnat" haiku, something that I must admit is totally foreign to me:
http://www.haikupoet.com/gnat.html
Does it make any sense at all?
Paul
http://www.haikupoet.com/gnat.html
Does it make any sense at all?
Paul
posted by extraspecialbitter at 5:38 PM
1 Comments:
i think this is interesting. i also haven't tried "concrete" haiku. i've been reading a lot of john wills' one liner haiku, trying to condense more. my favorite version is paul's four line version.
the "concrete" version does present interesting alternatives...
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