Wednesday, October 13, 2004

gnat (2)

Here's an idea I had for a "concrete" version of John's "gnat" haiku, something that I must admit is totally foreign to me:

Does it make any sense at all?



Blogger duchamp said...

i think this is interesting. i also haven't tried "concrete" haiku. i've been reading a lot of john wills' one liner haiku, trying to condense more. my favorite version is paul's four line version.

the "concrete" version does present interesting alternatives...

8:27 PM  

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