one liners
I was experimenting recently with one liners (with photos) - you can view them here and your thoughts are welcome:
one liners
-Sangeet
-Sangeet
posted by sangeet at 6:18 PM
posted by sangeet at 6:18 PM
2 Comments:
Hanging downwards: the weight of her beauty
out of all four, i think this one works the best...without the picture, it has a double meaning of course...even with the picture, i received the other image in my head in any case...
the three below seem more like titles than haiku...although they could be expanded a bit. they would take some percolation...
doorways: look, linger, enter or exit ?
a tree on a journey
the clouds: pausing for a moment
You're right John - I don't think they work as Haiku - I was after some captions - and decided on the minimal, haiku approach..
I'm not sure that the first one works (photo of the rose) without the caption ..
still percolating :)
TQ for the feedback..
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