3 misc
too busy to notice
the colours of autumn
disappearng..
new resolution after
new resolution
on paper..
Sangeet 27-11-2004
the colours of autumn
disappearng..
new resolution after
new resolution
on paper..
Sangeet 27-11-2004
posted by sangeet at 7:30 PM
1 Comments:
Sangeet,
The first haiku is especially evocative. The line break after the second line is very effective, and (in my opinion) "makes" the haiku.
The second haiku reminds me of this oldie:
New Year's Day --
the health club crowded
with resolutions
Paul
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