Wednesday, December 29, 2004

the light goes on

Mary took this photo about two years ago when we were compiling material for "Subway Serenade", but I've never managed to write a haiku worthy of it. Would anyone like to take a try?

Here's an old one dating back to the earlier days of the Shiki list:

an artist’s bedroom —
four bare walls
and a broken light



Blogger sangeet said...

Like your old ku here!
As for your question, lets have a go... :)

on the crumbling ceiling
a new light bulb..


3:59 PM  
Blogger Trena said...


The artist's studio -
crumbles away
in light

1:54 PM  
Blogger Davve said...

Spent ceiling wood panes
enduring alongside light bulb
paint peeling, crumbling

9:49 PM  

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