february snow
happy new year folks!
it seems that life circumstances tend to offer more or less time for haiku...
sometimes more...
sometimes less...
i've been playing with the following for a few weeks now:
february snow i stir coffee with a second cube of sugar
february snow i stir coffee with a second sugarcube
february snow into my coffee another cube of sugar
a second cube of sugar
turns with the spoon
february snow
or should i be thinking of a second cup of coffee?
second cup of coffee
wind stirs the new snowfall
i hope to be here more often...
it seems that life circumstances tend to offer more or less time for haiku...
sometimes more...
sometimes less...
i've been playing with the following for a few weeks now:
february snow i stir coffee with a second cube of sugar
february snow i stir coffee with a second sugarcube
february snow into my coffee another cube of sugar
a second cube of sugar
turns with the spoon
february snow
or should i be thinking of a second cup of coffee?
second cup of coffee
wind stirs the new snowfall
i hope to be here more often...
posted by johnruntrainer at 11:12 AM
2 Comments:
I like the idea of a second cup of coffee. Then again, I'm usually good for two or three cups a day.
Perhaps the sugar cube figured into the real moment, but how about something as simple as:
february snow
a second cup of coffee
I like the various permutations John - particularly your:
second cup of coffee
wind stirs the new snowfall
Liked your suggestion very much too Extrabitter :) Strong, clear image.
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