Sangeet - very nice! At first glance a nitpicker (not me) would tell you that tulips don't lean, but in front of a light source they certainly do. I'm not sure it's important to know that the vase is mad of glass, but in the context of your haiku I can "see" it very clearly.
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Sangeet - very nice! At first glance a nitpicker (not me) would tell you that tulips don't lean, but in front of a light source they certainly do. I'm not sure it's important to know that the vase is mad of glass, but in the context of your haiku I can "see" it very clearly.
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