two from the train
knock knock! who’s there?
chance of rain —
a crow perched
on a satellite dish
summer clouds —
the dog stretches
then lies back down
posted by extraspecialbitter at 7:00 PM
3 Comments:
Hello! Its been a while!
I like them both! The second one especially captures the experience for me;
What were your thoughts around the first one?
Sangeet
i love the second one
moonless autumn...
even the shadows
are camouflaged
Haiku Poems
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