Friday, August 12, 2005

two from the train

knock knock! who’s there?
chance of rain —
a crow perched
on a satellite dish

summer clouds —
the dog stretches
then lies back down

3 Comments:

Blogger sangeet said...

Hello! Its been a while!

I like them both! The second one especially captures the experience for me;

What were your thoughts around the first one?

Sangeet

6:57 AM  
Blogger its_baxter said...

i love the second one

9:01 PM  
Blogger AMIT said...

moonless autumn...
even the shadows
are camouflaged

Haiku Poems

5:42 AM  

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