3 misc

too busy to notice
the colours of autumn
disappearng..

new resolution after
new resolution
on paper..

Sangeet 27-11-2004

veterans day

Veterans day
new leaves cover
last year's debris

drag

Mary took this photo as part of our Subway Serenade presentation for HNA 2003 in New York, but I never managed to write a haiku that I thought was worthy of it. A year and a half later, I thought I'd try again. C&C would be appreciated.

out in the fresh air
the old woman takes a long drag
on her cigarette

Bad reception..

What do you think? Do any of them work? If they do, which works best?

bad reception -
our conversation
stopped

bad reception
our conversation
in mid-air

bad reception
our conversation
stopped in mid air

Thanks,
Sangeet

pumpkins face

gone
the pumpkins face
eaten by squirrels